baby kiss real slow
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2minsforslashingPairing: Joe Thornton/Patrick Marleau
Team: Sharks
Rating: R, as some content may be inappropriate for young children. lol.
Joe's POV
A/N: You all know what happens when you get that idea at a quarter to 1 in the morning and end up finishing at half past 2. It was one of those nights.
He stood in the shower, letting the water wash over his sturdy body. I walked across the tile floor towards his illusive steamy form.
Hot vapor rushed to greet me opening the door. I placed my hands on his soaked shoulders, allowing him to roll them back and relax.
He wrapped his arms firm around me and rested his heavy head against my chest.
“Hey there.” I whispered into his ear. He tightened his grasp on my back.
I ran my hands through his hair and down his face. He took a deep breath, undid his coiled arms from around me and opened the shower door.
I watched him fold the towel around himself, noting how his hands crossed over each other, tucking one end into the other.
He turned his head back for a brief moment as if to look at me, still standing in the cascade of flowing water.
After he had disappeared from my line of vision, I hopped out, shaking myself off before running down the hall to find him.
I located him in the room with the door cracked slightly ajar. His back was turned and he was staring out the window, towel still snug about his waist.
I perambulated forward to him and set my palms on his hipbones and sunk my face into the nook of his neck.
His hands instructed me to trace the contours of his profile.
I closed my eyes as he continued to guide me across the map, encompassing me in my imagination of the very real man I was touching.
He led me back to his collarbone and turned to face me. The look in his eyes told me what he craved.
Our lips pressed together, faces pivoting so our noses didn’t hit. He pushed harder, digging his hands into my biceps as he did so.
My hands clasped his face and dragged him tighter to me. He recoiled his grasp and grabbed my hair, his lips demanding more, pressing harder and faster.
My tongue shoved its way through his burning mouth and there our tongues met like two red snakes.
They wanted more and more of the other each passing second. Separating, only to have them track down each other again.
My tongue clawed away from his and began to explore the wonders of his mouth. His tongue forcefully pushing mine back into my mouth.
His dancing along on my lips before I all too soon pulled away.
The sun, shining brighter now as it neared noon, caught the whites of his eyes and mirrored back at me.
He walked across the soft carpeting and dropped his towel into a heap on the floor.
Before I knew it my hands were on him and shoving him up onto the bed.
His head hit the back of the pillow and he climbed his legs up my lower back. His hands held fast onto the sheets, biting his bared teeth against his lips as I drove myself into him.
I moved inside of him, feeling the graciousness that is Patrick Marleau. He moaned the longer I held myself there.
His legs loosened around my back and letting him lock them around again, I ran my hands down his thighs and landing on both sides of his crotch.
His legs pulsed as I crawled them across his inner loin.
Leaving them to lay on his abdomen, I stuck my cock deeper in once more.
“Uuuuugh Joooeee.” He moaned, squirming from side to side.
He had no strength left as his legs gave way and slipped under me. He let his head roll to the right and he breathed at a rapid pace.
I laid myself down on top of him and touched his sweaty face, wiping a drop from under his eye. With delicate lips, I kissed his blazing cheek.
I flipped my body to his side and wrapped my arm beneath his exhausted form.
The gentle feel of the sheets reminded me of the perfect man I was laying next to.
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Date: 2009-03-08 09:19 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-03-08 09:30 pm (UTC)haha, I just didn't want to make it seem to short. But that's the pace I wanted, so maybe it worked? XD
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Date: 2009-03-08 09:35 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-03-08 09:37 pm (UTC)Two things I noticed though, you said shacking when I think you meant shaking, and you used 'hi' instead of 'his'
But I wouldn't worry too much about it! Just fix them when you can, because god knows it happens to everyone.
Oh, and I really liked it by the way ;)
And win deprived? Amen to that.
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Date: 2009-03-08 10:33 pm (UTC)thank youu. :]
I know right? Come on boys.
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Date: 2009-03-08 10:54 pm (UTC)Seriously though! I even bought a pair of teal pants yesterday.
I don't want to wear them if they're playing like this D:
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Date: 2009-03-08 10:58 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-03-09 12:10 am (UTC)But I totally understand. I'm almost sick of wearing my various sharks shirts
and sweatshirt.
at the beginning of the season? HELL TO THE YEAH.
Now it's like..nah, not until they prove to me they can actually WIN a game.
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Date: 2009-03-09 12:35 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-03-09 02:54 am (UTC)Yes, creepy random is creepy.
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Date: 2009-03-09 03:09 am (UTC)to no avail. :/
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Date: 2009-03-09 03:42 am (UTC)I'll still be wearing my Jersey through it all, because it makes me feel good ;p.
and a little off topic, I loove your icon.
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Date: 2009-03-09 04:23 am (UTC)+
Meh. I wore my jersey to sleep the other night, and I hadn't seen November, so I was hoping it would be good luck.
stupidsharkslettingmedownlately.
(the pens aren't though. so it's odd)
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Date: 2009-03-09 05:03 am (UTC)Then I won't ever take them off D:}
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Date: 2009-03-09 09:20 am (UTC)<3333333333.
write the ryans yeah?
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Date: 2009-03-09 01:50 pm (UTC)i will for you, :]
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Date: 2009-03-10 06:28 am (UTC)I ADORE IT!!!! Patty!fic is one of my all time favorite things ever. He's just so sweet!!!
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Date: 2009-03-10 09:06 pm (UTC)+
thank you so much! he's probably the sweetest guy ever, ngl.
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Date: 2009-03-22 03:15 am (UTC)