Sometimes the early morning stories are the best :) Two things I noticed though, you said shacking when I think you meant shaking, and you used 'hi' instead of 'his' But I wouldn't worry too much about it! Just fix them when you can, because god knows it happens to everyone. Oh, and I really liked it by the way ;)
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Date: 2009-03-08 09:37 pm (UTC)Two things I noticed though, you said shacking when I think you meant shaking, and you used 'hi' instead of 'his'
But I wouldn't worry too much about it! Just fix them when you can, because god knows it happens to everyone.
Oh, and I really liked it by the way ;)
And win deprived? Amen to that.