First Post---Reward Well Deserved Part 1/?

[gdroxmysox464.livejournal.com]

Title: A Reward Well Deserved
Characters: Wojtek Wolski/Paul Stastny and Andrew Brunette/Ian Lapperiere
Rating: PG
Word Count: 411
Setting: Denver, Colorado
Disclaimer: I don't own them...I wish I did...then they could live in my closet and I would be one happy person.
Author Note: This is my first post! Umm...concrit would be pretty sweet...so anyways, enjoy!!!

There were 2 minutes left in overtime. The puck was all over the place, no one was really able to get it under control.

One minute remaining in overtime.

Somehow, the puck found its way to my stick. I skated full speed down the ice. I heard my name called. I looked over, there was Wojtek.

It’s now or never.

I passed the puck to him and he shot it.

SCOOOOOOOOOORREEEEE!

The puck had smoothly snuck past Ryan Miller’s pad into the back of the net. I saw Wojtek’s face light up as I skated toward him and tackled him into the boards.

Before the rush of guys from the bench could tackle the both of us, I whispered in his ear, “You’ll get your reward later.”

The rest of the team moshed in and congratulated Wojtek.

One by one the guys patted his helmet and skated away. Lappy came up, grabbed his ass, kissed him, and then skated away. It was standard Lappy procedure, but still, Wojtek shot me a glance that was half sorry for what Lappy did, half a ‘save me’ glance. Once all the guys were gone, I tackled him again and pressed him suggestively into the boards before skating off to the locker room.

Slowly, the locker room cleared out. Wojtek went off to the showers and I started to plan the night ahead of us. Joe came in and sat down next to me.

“Good job tonight, Paul. Every game I see a little more of your father in you.”

I looked up. “Thanks, Joe.”

“So…Wojtek got the winning goal. How you gonna congratulate him?”

I stuttered on my words. “Oh, you know, just a quiet night in…probably play some Madden. Maybe I’ll actually let him win tonight.”

Right then, Andrew walked out of the showers. “Good job, Paul. Tell Wolly that too. I woulda told him, but he’s kinda busy at the moment, and I didn’t want to take all the fun of interrupting him for myself.”

Note to self: don’t let Andrew in on anymore secrets…he can’t keep his mouth shut.

“Ian and I are gonna go have some fun tonight…’ya know, the-” he thrust his pelvis, “kind of fun.”

He walked off. I could feel my face red hot with embarrassment.

“It’s ok, Paul. I know about you and Wojtek. Everyone does. It’s not a secret in here.”

“Yea, thanks to Andrew and his big mouth. Anyways, I’ll see ‘ya later, Joe.”

Comments

[estes-vig-girl.livejournal.com]

FC!!!!!!!!! *crazy hyper dance*
Well, you and I were on the phone when I read this so you know how much it makes me laugh...aka A LOT!
So yes, very nicely written. All in all flows well. Maybe add the POV in the AN just because I like to know who I'm reading before I read (although I'm not dense and know the way you work). As for accuracy, too many words for Joe. Haha, kidding.
As for Bruno's line of brilliance complete with pelvic thrust...makes me laugh and, although he totally doesn't seem the type to make that joke, I can totally hear him saying that. 'Cause we all know Bruno's secretly a goofball.
So, yes, email me for a beta! As if we don't beta enough stuff of each other's as it is.
Can't wait for the kngo392u5ijh4uf that we all know is coming.
PS~I can't believe you misspelled Lappy's name! What kind of Avs fan are you!??!? Just kidding. It gets to be such a habit to type two p's. It's All About Lappy!

[gdroxmysox464.livejournal.com]

Um...what does FC mean?

Anywhos, yea! I always do that because of Lappy...yea...oh well...

[ljhockey.livejournal.com]

Yay! Avs fic! Sorry, not real crit, just want to see more! :)

Ok, but why is Wolly busy? I hope he's behaving in the shower and not with someone else!

[gdroxmysox464.livejournal.com]

Hehe I hope he's behaving too...he better be

[lady-lilith.livejournal.com]

I'm just kinda getting into the Avs (*sighs* I'm such a hockey whore). And I was ever so curious who people paired Ian with. After Paul scored all those goals with Andrew, I'd like to see more with these four.