FC!!!!!!!!! *crazy hyper dance* Well, you and I were on the phone when I read this so you know how much it makes me laugh...aka A LOT! So yes, very nicely written. All in all flows well. Maybe add the POV in the AN just because I like to know who I'm reading before I read (although I'm not dense and know the way you work). As for accuracy, too many words for Joe. Haha, kidding. As for Bruno's line of brilliance complete with pelvic thrust...makes me laugh and, although he totally doesn't seem the type to make that joke, I can totally hear him saying that. 'Cause we all know Bruno's secretly a goofball. So, yes, email me for a beta! As if we don't beta enough stuff of each other's as it is. Can't wait for the kngo392u5ijh4uf that we all know is coming. PS~I can't believe you misspelled Lappy's name! What kind of Avs fan are you!??!? Just kidding. It gets to be such a habit to type two p's. It's All About Lappy!
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Date: 2007-10-09 12:56 am (UTC)Well, you and I were on the phone when I read this so you know how much it makes me laugh...aka A LOT!
So yes, very nicely written. All in all flows well. Maybe add the POV in the AN just because I like to know who I'm reading before I read (although I'm not dense and know the way you work). As for accuracy, too many words for Joe. Haha, kidding.
As for Bruno's line of brilliance complete with pelvic thrust...makes me laugh and, although he totally doesn't seem the type to make that joke, I can totally hear him saying that. 'Cause we all know Bruno's secretly a goofball.
So, yes, email me for a beta! As if we don't beta enough stuff of each other's as it is.
Can't wait for the kngo392u5ijh4uf that we all know is coming.
PS~I can't believe you misspelled Lappy's name! What kind of Avs fan are you!??!? Just kidding. It gets to be such a habit to type two p's. It's All About Lappy!