Fic: Early Morning Visitor

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Title: Early Morning Visitor
Author: Dee
Rating: PG
Pairing: Henrik (Hank) Zetterberg/Ryan Miller (Detroit Red Wings/Buffalo Sabres)
Disclaimer: None of this is true. It’s only a product of my overactive imagination.
Summary: Ryan gets a early morning surprise.
Author’s notes: Getting the limbs loosened and the muses cracking is not an easy task. But I can see some improvement. Perhaps I’ll be better than crap if I keep going? Hmm…One should never take a year off from writing. Written for the 13prompts challenge. Prompt: Early Mornings.



Early morning.

It was Ryan’s least favorite time of the day. Unless he was still up because of a good game. Or, better yet, if he was still up because he and Hank and managed to find each other amidst their crazy schedules and ended up in bed. He couldn’t remember the later happening and he knew they didn’t play the night before, so Ryan was definitely not enjoying whatever had woken him up in the early morning hours during the middle of his vacation.

Moving to swing his legs over the side of the bed, he couldn’t hide the gasp as he connected with something hard and warm.

“Can’t you let a guy sleep?”

Ryan froze and reached out, his hand touching a soft, thin shirt before realizing Hank was in his bed.

“What are you doing here?” he hissed, reaching over them to turn on the light. “My parents will kill you if they find out you snuck into my room.”

“I had to come see you,” Hank said as he rolled onto his back and smiled. “Congratulate you on your extension.”

“Well, my brother’s getting married tomorrow and you’re going to have the whole house awake,” he tried to chastise but his words were softened by the smile on his face. “I missed you.”

“I won’t be here long enough to wake the entire house,” Hank smirked. “I just wanted a few minutes with you before I had to leave. The Cup’ll be in Sweden in a few days and I need to get back before they realize I’ve gone.” He reached up and pressed his palm to Ryan’s cheek. “I missed you too.”

Ryan nodded and turned off the light before laying back down. He pulled Hank close to his chest. “A few hours,” he whispered. “I just want to hold you for a few hours.”

He could feel Hank nod. “My plane leaves at five,” he whispered and Ryan turned to look at the clock. Two-thirty. Maybe early mornings weren’t so bad, he decided as he kissed his lover’s temple. Maybe all you needed was a sexy Swede. And a two hour time limit.

They’d get longer together, he decided. He’d go to Sweden to visit the other man. As soon as The Cup left.

End

Comments

[fic-of-elise.livejournal.com]

I like this! I like the beginning and how cute the waking up morning perspective was. My only gripe actually is accuracy... Miller's parents are in East Lansing, Michigan, and not Buffalo... unless this takes place in East Lansing, then nevermind.

I was hoping for a "congrats" ryan fic (even though its only one line).

good work.

[a2h.livejournal.com]

I kinda had it in my head that he was in East Lansing.

I'll admit, I'm way past rusty and am slowly beating my head against the wall to get back into writing. I do have 11 more prompts with them and will, for you, get you some congrats Ryan fic.

Thanks so much for the feedback. It's good to know that someone still likes my writing. :)

[fic-of-elise.livejournal.com]

i do, i didn't know it before. Is your writing in your personal journal?

I'd love some congrats Ryan fic. If you need help with Sabres stuff, i offer my services, since they are my team.

I understand the writing issue, I do, so if you need anything, just ask.

I like where you come from in terms of your writing, it's very similar to my own.

good work, to reiterate.

[jess-the1.livejournal.com]

That was so cute.

[xunfathomablex.livejournal.com]

Awesome. ♥

HI ELISE! *waves to comments above* ^___^