[identity profile] raiisrad.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] 2minsforslashing
 Title: Here's to falling in love with your Best Friend
Pairing: None specified (but I kinda had Sidney Crosby/Colby Armstrong in mind when I wrote it)
Rating: PG
Summary: The title says it all...
A/N: This is my first time posting...I'm scared.  This isn't really a fic per say, it's a kind of poem type thing.  I hope you enjoy it, and if it's totally terrible, let me know so I can work on fixing it.  Thanks!!

Heres to falling in love with your Best Friend
Why do you care about me anyway?
I'm just a common boy,
And you're this angel, perfect in every way.
What could you ever see in me?
I'm awkward, loud, unimportant,
And you're perfect, confident, everything I'm not.
What did I do to deserve someone like you?
Because when you tell me that you need me,
It makes me feel so special,
Like something more than I am,
And even though I know you're more than I deserve,
I can't help but want more.

But as much as I want it,
I'm afraid.
Afraid of losing you altogether,
Afraid that if I told you any of this you'd never want to see me again.
I'd rather have you as a friend than see you walk out of my life altogether.

So I guess this is how things will stay.
Me, watching you as we joke and play and tease,
You, blissfully unaware that I see you as anything more than a friend or brother.
Until the day comes when I finally get the guts to tell you that I need you,
That I love you more than anything, anyone else,
Until it's too late.

Date: 2008-07-02 09:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jess-the1.livejournal.com
so sad, but so good.

I saw it being Sid and Colby as well.

Date: 2008-07-02 09:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] diaryofaredhead.livejournal.com
Awwwww. Super cute. I think of everything being Sidney/Colby.. they are my favorites. I really need to go write something of them really soon.

Anyhow, it was loverly.. and sad.. and I love them forever.

Date: 2008-07-02 11:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xunfathomablex.livejournal.com
Aw, that was sweet. :D Definitely Colby/Sidney love there; I can see it fitting as a few other people, but mostly those two. ♥

Date: 2008-07-03 03:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dum-spiro19.livejournal.com
I really enjoyed that! I could also see the Colby/Sidney relationship. I hope to read more from you and very nice job.

Date: 2008-07-03 09:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kaatiya.livejournal.com
I liked this. Not a huge fan of the pairing, but I liked this. Nice cadance throughout. Only tip would be to stop sometimes before the rhythm is broken. That's key to a piece like this. But very nice work. And good use of the very-tough-to-make-work second person. Definitely would like to read more.

Date: 2008-07-07 01:50 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Wow!!! Just Wow!!!!! You are so so talented!!! Do you write professionally? You should if you don't. This really touched me very deeply!!! So sweet and so sublime!!! You really captured a sort of inner despair that gets to the heart of the human experience! Write more!!

Date: 2009-02-26 10:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xwhatsernamexo.livejournal.com
Wow, this is so amazing. It shows just how awkward the whole thing is. Congrats!

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