[identity profile] absentaserpis.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] 2minsforslashing
Title: Amour Sincère
Pairing: Marty Biron/?, Ryan Miller cameo but he definitely doesn't want in.
Rating: I have no clue... PG-13?
Word Count: 345
Disclaimer: You know... I can't help wondering. But lets avoid the lawyers and say no it's not true.
Notes: A totally innocent comment was made and my mind likes to wander a lot and it likes crack even more. I can't even blame Skye for this one. Just don't throw the tomatos too hard thanks~



You come to him, laying on a bed of porcelain white, so short but stacked. With your golden hue, and curves as smooth as buttermilk, I can't help but feel a bit of longing over the memory of what cannot now be mine.

Countless nights we have shared together and still more mornings I have spent indulging in your delicate flavors. You are perfection that only my loving hands can create and it pains me to think that something so soft and supple could possibly be battered up by another.

Yet there you are, spread out in front of some other man like it's nothing more than your job to satisfy him. He butters up your smooth surfaces and then... oh how he smothers you so unceremoniously, cutting you down to pieces only to leave you swallowed up. Lost. Forgotten.

I can only watch with bated breath and palms pressed flat against the invisible bars of your prison. It’s so unbearable but as soon as I resolve to save you, reclaim you as my own and give you a proper finish, the air around me condenses and my head goes hazy. I’m sure you’re just trying to protect from the worst part.

When the smoke clears all that's left in your wake is a sticky mess and with a heavy heart I say my soft spoken farewells. But before I can finish my blessing, a sudden pain knocks me in the back of the head and a small square of berry jelly falls to my feet. I turn to glare at the source of the distraction, angry at being torn from our fleeting special time.

"What, Millsy, what do you want!?" I ask quite curtly.

"Marty,” he shoots back, equally irked. “Do we have to stop every time we pass the damn House of Pancakes?"

I deliver a swift punch to his arm in response for cursing you, my love, and with one more longing backward glance, I stalk back to the car, content in remembering that we will only be apart until the trip home.

Date: 2007-03-27 11:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bkm5191.livejournal.com
*giggles* I admit I was like "OMG bad!fic ahoy!" I am so glad I made it to the ending :)

Date: 2007-03-27 11:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cali-diva10.livejournal.com
lol he's talking about pancakes! At first I was like woah this is deep and I was trying to figure who it was he was talking about...Pancakes are very important in a mans life.

Good job!

Date: 2007-03-27 03:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thought-ribbons.livejournal.com
Oh man, that was bad! Loved it!

Date: 2007-03-27 04:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] skye-chan14.livejournal.com
...*oh so fucking dead* ...XD Ahahahahahhahahahahahhaha. omg, I LOVE IT. XD

AND THAT'S RIGHT. This one totally wasn't my fault. ♥ XD It was aaaaaaaaaall you. XD

*loves* XD

Date: 2007-03-30 01:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] skye-chan14.livejournal.com
What?! How does that work? XD ...*shrugs* Ah well.

Date: 2007-04-01 06:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] skye-chan14.livejournal.com
Who, me? Never. *innocent*

Date: 2007-03-27 06:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_goldenroad_/
OMG Marty and his pancakes!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am SO happy that you wrote this! Hahahahahaha

*squees loudly*

Date: 2007-03-30 03:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_goldenroad_/
are you serious?! that makes me feel super special! :D

Date: 2007-03-27 09:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xoxodirtyjersey.livejournal.com
ahahahahah beautiful <3
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Date: 2007-03-28 02:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] creepy-crawly.livejournal.com
Ohhhh, I think I popped a lung laughing at that...ouch!

But totally worth it! This is, like, so much love! There are no words...at least, not that I can recall! *giggles*

Date: 2007-03-31 01:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] juicyjussi.livejournal.com
MARTTYYYYY.

Loved it. The pancakes were totally hot.

Date: 2007-04-01 04:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darkenedsun9.livejournal.com
That was great! The sad thing is that I can actually see something like that happening... >_>

Date: 2007-04-02 04:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sxeraven.livejournal.com
Bwahahaha! Do we have to stop every time we pass an iHOP????

Abso-fuckin'-lutely. *L*

Date: 2007-04-21 10:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] johnny-red-fan.livejournal.com
Marty and his pancakes! I miss Marty, lol. But I loved the fic!

Date: 2007-05-13 04:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] slasher48.livejournal.com
lmfao...I love that...I seriously was like WHOA he's getting a little graphic here wanting this dude...and he's talkin about PANCAKES! XD...and I love the Ryan cameo..perfectly put in there :D

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