Drabble *Warmth*
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2minsforslashingTitle : Warmth
Author : MizsFrankie
Date: 12/17/06
Pairing : Peter Schaefer / ? Anyone
Rating: G for..good lol
Disclaimer: Yes its fake,I dont own anyone,But if they'd like to own me,sure! Oh yea,Dont sue,i dont have anything you'd want!
My first shot at a drabble,hope you all like it.
Early december and even though there should be snow on the ground,there wasnt,the sun was shinning,the vent in my room spewed air,i could feel the slight bit of warmth surrounding me.
Turning the nosel on,water spat down into the small bath tub,i stood under it letting the hot beads of water hit my exhausted body,Warm steam rose and circulated around me hugging me untill my cheeks felt like fire.
Tuggin on my sweat pants i plooped down on the bed and rolled myself around under the thickness of the covers,my head hit the pillow and felt like heaven,This is how i expect a cacoon to be like,warm,cozy,with the feeling of safety
When i freeze my butt off shoveling the drive way just so i didnt have to freeze my feet walking threw the snow,then rewarding myself with a big mug full of hot chocolate,the warmth attacks my hands as i first pick it up,what a relife.Then i bring it to my mouth,im about to take a sip but i stop to blow on it just a little and feel my face heat up and my cheeks get a rosey pink glow,then i finally take a sip,its hot like chocolate lava pouring into my mouth and down my throat,that feeling makes me appreciate the little things.
All that was nothing compared to the warmth of laying in his arms,his heat oozing from his perfect body seeping into my skin and exploding into my soul,The warmth of his hand running softly along my face,A light brush of my hair,him seuing his hands together with mine,a peck on the cheek,or the experiance of his lips pressed against mine.Thats the only heat i would ever need.
Author : MizsFrankie
Date: 12/17/06
Pairing : Peter Schaefer / ? Anyone
Rating: G for..good lol
Disclaimer: Yes its fake,I dont own anyone,But if they'd like to own me,sure! Oh yea,Dont sue,i dont have anything you'd want!
My first shot at a drabble,hope you all like it.
Early december and even though there should be snow on the ground,there wasnt,the sun was shinning,the vent in my room spewed air,i could feel the slight bit of warmth surrounding me.
Turning the nosel on,water spat down into the small bath tub,i stood under it letting the hot beads of water hit my exhausted body,Warm steam rose and circulated around me hugging me untill my cheeks felt like fire.
Tuggin on my sweat pants i plooped down on the bed and rolled myself around under the thickness of the covers,my head hit the pillow and felt like heaven,This is how i expect a cacoon to be like,warm,cozy,with the feeling of safety
When i freeze my butt off shoveling the drive way just so i didnt have to freeze my feet walking threw the snow,then rewarding myself with a big mug full of hot chocolate,the warmth attacks my hands as i first pick it up,what a relife.Then i bring it to my mouth,im about to take a sip but i stop to blow on it just a little and feel my face heat up and my cheeks get a rosey pink glow,then i finally take a sip,its hot like chocolate lava pouring into my mouth and down my throat,that feeling makes me appreciate the little things.
All that was nothing compared to the warmth of laying in his arms,his heat oozing from his perfect body seeping into my skin and exploding into my soul,The warmth of his hand running softly along my face,A light brush of my hair,him seuing his hands together with mine,a peck on the cheek,or the experiance of his lips pressed against mine.Thats the only heat i would ever need.
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Date: 2006-12-18 04:26 pm (UTC)Just alittle helpful hit
Drabble= 100 words or less
Postcard= 200 words or less
Ficlet= 1000 words or less
Since your just over 200 words i'd call it a ficlet ;)
but I really like it keep writing!
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Date: 2006-12-19 02:51 am (UTC)I never knew there was so many rules to fic writing lol
Ill keep this in mind tho.
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Date: 2006-12-19 02:54 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-12-18 10:45 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-12-19 02:50 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-12-19 03:58 am (UTC)Aside from that, though, you've definitely got off to a good start. The imagery is very pretty and vivid, and the emotions are well-conveyed. :)