Haha, yeahh, English is my first language. But the floaty-ness? Im guessing you mean where I just skim over parts? Um yeah, that's where I'm being really lazy and where I don't want to write anymore D:
and of course this makes up for it lol, it's not like I actually knew you read it before. To make up for it, maybe I should see you next chapters? ;)
But I'm so glad you like the Sharks now too! Patty is a great guy (and hurt at the moment, ugh, like the rest of this freaking team) but his plans don't really end up the way he wants them to... unless he wanted them to have a handjob in a parking lot? I don't know.
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Date: 2009-04-01 05:07 pm (UTC)Haha, yeahh, English is my first language. But the floaty-ness? Im guessing you mean where I just skim over parts? Um yeah, that's where I'm being really lazy and where I don't want to write anymore D:
and of course this makes up for it lol, it's not like I actually knew you read it before. To make up for it, maybe I should see you next chapters? ;)
But I'm so glad you like the Sharks now too! Patty is a great guy (and hurt at the moment, ugh, like the rest of this freaking team) but his plans don't really end up the way he wants them to... unless he wanted them to have a handjob in a parking lot? I don't know.
Thanks for the review!