I'm back to saying: WOW. This can seriously run as your best chapter. And I'm trying sooo hard not to flip and go on and on about how fucking hot it was that Joe jerked off Evgeni in an empty parking lot, because it was SO HOTT!!!!
Okay *deep breaths* if this helps, I literally love this chapter so much that I've just about read it twice now. But yeah, Evgeni sticking up for Patrick, how cute! lol.
I love how all of this took place, there wasn't, beyond the bar, a single awkward moment and they just *know* each other. They have that connection between and my god, how wonderful did you build it up. Evgeni admitting he forgot why he was angry, he just *knew* he was supposed to be... someone get the Russian a hug... or a hand (guttery). And just his whole admittance and just how he just kind of fell apart, precious because he *let* it happen, Avery wasn't there to take advantage or Joe wasn't around for the after-shock, Evgeni willing let that happen and huge moment. All of it is.
Especially at the end, when Joe answers him and it's big because before, he wasn't willing to do it!
"He regained possession of the puffy lips, sucking on them greedily as he humped Evgeni’s leg without shame in the middle of a dark, empty parking lot."
""I like it too," Joe admitted quietly, the darkness seeming to lift all around him."
The first, I love because, well, that's sort of obvious. And I can picture it happened XD
The second before it's so adorably sweet without trying to be.
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Date: 2009-04-01 09:40 am (UTC)Kay... I just finished it... here you goes.
I'm back to saying: WOW. This can seriously run as your best chapter. And I'm trying sooo hard not to flip and go on and on about how fucking hot it was that Joe jerked off Evgeni in an empty parking lot, because it was SO HOTT!!!!
Okay *deep breaths* if this helps, I literally love this chapter so much that I've just about read it twice now. But yeah, Evgeni sticking up for Patrick, how cute! lol.
I love how all of this took place, there wasn't, beyond the bar, a single awkward moment and they just *know* each other. They have that connection between and my god, how wonderful did you build it up. Evgeni admitting he forgot why he was angry, he just *knew* he was supposed to be... someone get the Russian a hug... or a hand (guttery). And just his whole admittance and just how he just kind of fell apart, precious because he *let* it happen, Avery wasn't there to take advantage or Joe wasn't around for the after-shock, Evgeni willing let that happen and huge moment. All of it is.
Especially at the end, when Joe answers him and it's big because before, he wasn't willing to do it!
"He regained possession of the puffy lips, sucking on them greedily as he humped Evgeni’s leg without shame in the middle of a dark, empty parking lot."
""I like it too," Joe admitted quietly, the darkness seeming to lift all around him."
The first, I love because, well, that's sort of obvious. And I can picture it happened XD
The second before it's so adorably sweet without trying to be.
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