Just so you know, I am blaming my short attention span today for not reviewing sooner. Srsly, I couldn't do anymore for more than 5 minutes =O
*ahem*
So... where to start? Okay, I'll dive right in. I seriously, seriously LOVE the way that Joe realized, after reading earlier in the series that nothing came before hockey, that Evgeni was now in that number 1 spot. Major love...er, importance there. You made it clear early that no one, not even Tabea, could replace hockey for Joe. But here comes Evegeni, worming his way into Joe's heart and neither man knows the full extent of what happened. And suddenly, for Joe, it's all Evegeni, not hockey anymore. And the realization is a tad cliche but can you expect out of the man who says the cheesy things to start with? He realized it after he made a stupid accusation after mind-blowing sex, after the fight and Nabby ignoring him. But, it was so damn well placed. Seriously, cliche FTW! Every story has them, don't worry, lol. On the serious note again, he had to realize something after that or else, what did the cold shoulder, hurt and all that mean? Not a damn thing if they were just friends and he was sorry.
And Patrick, my Patty, what an amazing heart but jeez, boy, stay clear! No, no, I actually loved that. Because that's what a captain is supposed to do and Patty totally would, though I have it in my head if he found out, he'd go all bug-eyed and horrified than be all "I knew something was happening between ya" lol. But yeah, Patty coming in to help is amazing too, because those two being like they are, and Joe being all distracted, isn't good for the team, buddy.
And Devin *sigh* My love for him is relentless, even if he says the most bone-headed things.
You need more Todd in this. I love him sooo much, even when he's being an ass <3
OH! and the little sarcastic voice in Joe's head, yeah..., I totally see that voice and Joe getting into an arguement... and yes, I need sleep XD
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Date: 2009-03-31 09:26 am (UTC)Just so you know, I am blaming my short attention span today for not reviewing sooner. Srsly, I couldn't do anymore for more than 5 minutes =O
*ahem*
So... where to start? Okay, I'll dive right in. I seriously, seriously LOVE the way that Joe realized, after reading earlier in the series that nothing came before hockey, that Evgeni was now in that number 1 spot. Major love...er, importance there. You made it clear early that no one, not even Tabea, could replace hockey for Joe. But here comes Evegeni, worming his way into Joe's heart and neither man knows the full extent of what happened. And suddenly, for Joe, it's all Evegeni, not hockey anymore. And the realization is a tad cliche but can you expect out of the man who says the cheesy things to start with? He realized it after he made a stupid accusation after mind-blowing sex, after the fight and Nabby ignoring him. But, it was so damn well placed. Seriously, cliche FTW! Every story has them, don't worry, lol. On the serious note again, he had to realize something after that or else, what did the cold shoulder, hurt and all that mean? Not a damn thing if they were just friends and he was sorry.
And Patrick, my Patty, what an amazing heart but jeez, boy, stay clear! No, no, I actually loved that. Because that's what a captain is supposed to do and Patty totally would, though I have it in my head if he found out, he'd go all bug-eyed and horrified than be all "I knew something was happening between ya" lol. But yeah, Patty coming in to help is amazing too, because those two being like they are, and Joe being all distracted, isn't good for the team, buddy.
And Devin *sigh* My love for him is relentless, even if he says the most bone-headed things.
You need more Todd in this. I love him sooo much, even when he's being an ass <3
OH! and the little sarcastic voice in Joe's head, yeah..., I totally see that voice and Joe getting into an arguement... and yes, I need sleep XD