i admit, i was a little leery of this because (although i have been guilty of including them) the presence of a guy's family in fic is sort of a thing i'm usually not in favor of. i don't know, i like my fic realistic-ish, but a guy's family somehow seems (mostly) off limits. that said, this is impossibly cute, and i love this perceptive little girl. from the mouths of babes, as they say.
i liked it a lot, despite my hesitations. i loved the interactions, and how you were able to convey emotions without beating them to death.
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Date: 2009-03-16 08:01 pm (UTC)i liked it a lot, despite my hesitations. i loved the interactions, and how you were able to convey emotions without beating them to death.