Is it sad that I'm more interested in exactly what Nicky yelled at Alex at the party than I am about the conversation between Nicky and Guerin?
I'm also interested in which touches frighten Nicky and why since he touches Alex in the end of this one and lets Alex pat his head in the last one but wouldn't let Alex grip his shoulder. One more piece to this already confusing puzzle.
Once again, I have to point out how well you conveyed the loyalty between these two. The fact that Alex won't touch Nicky for Nicky and how Nicky will break down and touch Alex for Alex conveys this idea so well.
Once again beautifully painful in all the right ways.
So, that "End" there, does that mean no more of this story or will the loving, begging, kind of desperate fans get a new POV in a bit? Maybe a Geno's perceptive or even a Bill Guerin view of what happened?
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Date: 2009-03-16 04:52 pm (UTC)I'm also interested in which touches frighten Nicky and why since he touches Alex in the end of this one and lets Alex pat his head in the last one but wouldn't let Alex grip his shoulder. One more piece to this already confusing puzzle.
Once again, I have to point out how well you conveyed the loyalty between these two. The fact that Alex won't touch Nicky for Nicky and how Nicky will break down and touch Alex for Alex conveys this idea so well.
Once again beautifully painful in all the right ways.
So, that "End" there, does that mean no more of this story or will the loving, begging, kind of desperate fans get a new POV in a bit? Maybe a Geno's perceptive or even a Bill Guerin view of what happened?