Yes darling, sorry. I'm here to report what I thought. Yesterday was crazy hectic.
Okay so on the first part, I loved it and it was complete amazingness as always. I love the way you write [as I'm sure I've told you before], but I absolutely love the imagery and metaphors and everything. It's all so perfect and I just never want the chapters to end.
But anyways there is this one sentence that sticks out for me hardcore.
Because no matter how many minutes the game lasts, the loss is still a loss, and the end of the season is just as heartbreaking.
It's perfect and it's so true. I don't know, I just love it for whatever reason. It just fits.
And as for the end of the chapter. This was so perfect [fuck my life, I need a new word to describe how awesometastic you are for writing something to amazing], but anyways I love the way Evgeni's emotions are so vivid and this was just so raw and emotional and it actually made me feel like I was feeling what Evgeni was feeling. It made me want to just hug him and never let him go so hopefully Joe can fix him. He's so troubled and just so real.
The last paragraph of this was just so raw and perfect and so beautiful. The way Joe was just there when Evgeni needed him.. it was utter amazingness. I just.. I'm actually in awe.
I'm going to the store and I'm going to buy a damn thesaurus because I'm pretty sure everytime I comment you I use perfect, amazing, awesome etc. over a hundred times. Must get annoying, I'm sorry. Just too in awe to really use the brain.
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Date: 2009-03-14 12:32 pm (UTC)Okay so on the first part, I loved it and it was complete amazingness as always. I love the way you write [as I'm sure I've told you before], but I absolutely love the imagery and metaphors and everything. It's all so perfect and I just never want the chapters to end.
But anyways there is this one sentence that sticks out for me hardcore.
Because no matter how many minutes the game lasts, the loss is still a loss, and the end of the season is just as heartbreaking.
It's perfect and it's so true. I don't know, I just love it for whatever reason. It just fits.
And as for the end of the chapter. This was so perfect [fuck my life, I need a new word to describe how awesometastic you are for writing something to amazing], but anyways I love the way Evgeni's emotions are so vivid and this was just so raw and emotional and it actually made me feel like I was feeling what Evgeni was feeling. It made me want to just hug him and never let him go so hopefully Joe can fix him. He's so troubled and just so real.
The last paragraph of this was just so raw and perfect and so beautiful. The way Joe was just there when Evgeni needed him.. it was utter amazingness. I just.. I'm actually in awe.
I'm going to the store and I'm going to buy a damn thesaurus because I'm pretty sure everytime I comment you I use perfect, amazing, awesome etc. over a hundred times. Must get annoying, I'm sorry. Just too in awe to really use the brain.
♥ update soon. :)