Penalties are only the beginning

Thanks, that's exactly what I was going for, like, the really gentle punch. Like, it wouldn't knock your breath away, but it's still enough to make you go oof. And I went for the hint of that something else too, like there's that whole past that you don't know, but you still get a sense of them, how they are now, even if it's not how they were then. [/ramble]

XD Hee, thanks though, I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :D