Date: 2008-01-20 05:05 am (UTC)
As much as I love smut... especially hot boy smut... I was amused greatly by how you cut off each story. I really liked the use of 'gladly' at the end.. very cute. I adored these two parts the most...

Ryan smirked as he turned around to wind his arms around Danny’s neck, resting his palms at the nape of his neck and gently stroking the hair there. “And are you my reward?”

Danny smiled. “Not exactly, ‘cause I’m here whether you win or lose.”


How fucking sweet is that?! Don't we all want men that will say shit like that to us?!

Tom laughed. “Need some help?”

Max turned his pout on him. “Shut up. I cannot reach cookies.”


Awwwww.... This was just too cute.

Great job! ~hugs~
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