Penalties are only the beginning

I think so too! I always feel weird picking out such little things to ramble on about especially when it's the first thing I've read from someone :P That's exactly what I mean though, ending it on such a quiet note worked really well.

And I definitely don't mind hearing about the inner workings of things! I'm a creative writing major so I already read way too far into everything; I love hearing people talk about what they were thinking when they were writing things!