first, thats not a weird thing to comment on because the last lines are the most important part of the story, wraps it up neatly and tightly or it can send the story in a tailspin and sequels! second, i just wanted to show that they kissed and it wasnt that big of a deal, things may change but they're still the same two kids, friends and teammates and some day something more.
you probably didnt want to hear about the inner workings of the fic but...obviously i ramble too.
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Date: 2007-07-19 01:44 am (UTC)you probably didnt want to hear about the inner workings of the fic but...obviously i ramble too.
glad you enjoyed it!