Well, I know that you'll put up with my comments now so that helps.
Yes, please keep adding things! Those lines sort of explain that totally crazy thing I said about interweaving different threads: over time, and with new attention. Of course, the narrative is still carried by whatever's in Barrasso's head, and that's plenty enjoyable! There are moments where something slightly different seems to sneak in there, though, like in the letters, and where I started to get a sense of their relationship.
Okay, I just had to re-read this, and oh my, so good. How do you do this :)
also, oh man, in the last couple of days, the Canes have been all about how awesome Barrasso is; we do appreciate him!
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Yes, please keep adding things! Those lines sort of explain that totally crazy thing I said about interweaving different threads: over time, and with new attention. Of course, the narrative is still carried by whatever's in Barrasso's head, and that's plenty enjoyable! There are moments where something slightly different seems to sneak in there, though, like in the letters, and where I started to get a sense of their relationship.
Okay, I just had to re-read this, and oh my, so good. How do you do this :)
also, oh man, in the last couple of days, the Canes have been all about how awesome Barrasso is; we do appreciate him!