A fascinting twist at the end, with Hal just succumbing to the WANTING, surprising but very believable. Great stuff. I also like the hints at Hal's past experiences. I don't know if you plan to get into that, but it's an intriguing sort of undercurrent. Kris's inexperience and eagerness, and his willingness to trust Hal also makes this erotic in the extreme. Great stuff! More soon, I hope!