The way you wrote Joff - his sorrow, guilt, and envy for what the David & Milan have. The hot revenge sex between Milan & Joff. Milan getting Joff back for what he did to David. very, very hot and at the same time as the menage a trois... was just perfect. And I loved how you put Joff's fear of Chara in there. That was too great.
The ending really got me this morning. I don't think the first time, I read it though that I felt the same way. I can't help but think that Joff watching the tender moment between them, Joff wishes he had what they did. Sure, he has Scottie but things will never be like that between them.
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Date: 2008-11-29 07:23 pm (UTC)The way you wrote Joff - his sorrow, guilt, and envy for what the David & Milan have.
The hot revenge sex between Milan & Joff. Milan getting Joff back for what he did to David. very, very hot and at the same time as the menage a trois... was just perfect.
And I loved how you put Joff's fear of Chara in there. That was too great.
The ending really got me this morning. I don't think the first time, I read it though that I felt the same way. I can't help but think that Joff watching the tender moment between them, Joff wishes he had what they did. Sure, he has Scottie but things will never be like that between them.