http://brylinmoygyeroy.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] brylinmoygyeroy.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] 2minsforslashing 2008-11-28 09:42 pm (UTC)

Oh! This was wonderfully well-written, my friend! I loved this story. It was evil, but you didn't let Krech get hurt so...not THAT evil, haha. You have so many emotions in this story, and they are all very believable. I love the tenderness between Milan and David:) And I'm glad that Joff is sorry. And that end image, so sweet:) Protectiveness is so cute. And all the Chara-fear is so funny! I love poor Joff's reaction to hearing Milan say he'll go get Chara. I'm babbling, I'm sorry.

Great job! More from you soon!
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