Thanks so much for your very detailed feedback and nice comments. I can understand how the open-minded way in which I write the guys could weird some people out. I probably should write some of the guys (not the ones I've written so far but others I haven't) as married & very straight. Damn, I try to catch my mispellings but a few always manage to slip through.

It's good to know my writing has improved. I hesitated before even starting to write anything but did because there was very little Flyers fics on here. Writing it was my first experience with slash. I hadn't even read a whole lot of slash before I started. I hope my writing does continue to improve.