The ONLY thing putting a damper on the hottness of this story is the fact that one of the characters' names is "Dennis" (Wideman doesn't help either!), but I know that is, to quote Valmont, "beyond your control." :-) Indeed very steamy.

Liked this line very much: You know yourself. And when you hurt him, you'd hate yourself. Very cool.

From a writing standpoint I am curious about your choice of the second person in storytelling. (Not that I don't like it, I am just irritatingly and impertinently nosy.) What made you choose writing in the second person as opposed to the first?

Good job!