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 Title: I Told You So
Rating: PG
Pairing: Joe Thornton/Jonathan Cheechoo
Word count: 521
Disclaimer: I don’t own anything. If I did I wouldn’t be here =)
Summary: Joe needs space, Jon gives it to him

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Re: Trying out this idea of real ConCrit...

[zdarovyeh.livejournal.com]

I'm glad you made the attempt to do that, at least! Because I agree (well, to an extent, since I have a pairing doing exactly that, no matter how much it makes me gag sometimes *eyes them balefully*).

Joe does come off as being insecure, at least insomuch as not being able to handle Cheech not treating him like he expects, but this Cheech seems the exact opposite--incredibly secure in himself and his knowledge of Joe. If he was insecure, I would've expected him to get mad back at Joe when he was physically manhandling him. Lines, and lines crossed. Make sense?