well thank you for the comment <3 i guess I was trying to make it seem more like they were guys, because i'm sick of fics where the guys are like "OH MY GOD I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!!!!" cause guys aren't like that, and i wanted them to seem insecure and stuff.
Re: Trying out this idea of real ConCrit...
i guess I was trying to make it seem more like they were guys, because i'm sick of fics where the guys are like "OH MY GOD I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!!!!" cause guys aren't like that, and i wanted them to seem insecure and stuff.