http://offside.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] offside.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] 2minsforslashing 2007-10-10 04:48 am (UTC)



I love seeing Milly!fic. This was lovely, and just guh. The sex was raw, and real and nnngh everything just flowed (heh). I don't know why, but I loved that this was from Alex's POV. And that Kevin bottoms. Why is that so hot? It just is. Just like this fic. I loved that I could visualize everything so perfectly, like I could just close my eyes and see it all.

You really need to write more of these two.

His cheeks flushed, like the way they get after a hard shift during the game, and he’ll keep taking deep breaths and exhaling like he’s completely oblivious to how he’s already turning me on again.
LOVE! <3

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