Seriously you know how some fics feel shakey? or maybe that you feel shakey reading them , I didn't want to blink reading this because it would break the spell.
I love how the stop tart jerky feel to this, like he can't get hold of himself, can't enjoy it, cant not enjoy it and keeps doing one thing after the other that is self destructive. Drive drunk, fucks the girls lets the girl know what he's actually thinking.
And I like the way the girl is kind of him as well. Yeah she's being used, but she's using them and she knows and knowledge is all kinds of power. Like Brian would give anything for Ray to know, to just get it.
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Seriously you know how some fics feel shakey? or maybe that you feel shakey reading them , I didn't want to blink reading this because it would break the spell.
I love how the stop tart jerky feel to this, like he can't get hold of himself, can't enjoy it, cant not enjoy it and keeps doing one thing after the other that is self destructive. Drive drunk, fucks the girls lets the girl know what he's actually thinking.
And I like the way the girl is kind of him as well. Yeah she's being used, but she's using them and she knows and knowledge is all kinds of power. Like Brian would give anything for Ray to know, to just get it.
really awesome.